Wednesday, July 20, 2011

Discussion: What Indie Authors should or shouldn't do to establish their reputation...

I'd like to start this post that is open to feedback from both Indie authors and readers.

Authors-What type of behaviors do you implement to maintain the integrity of not only yourself as an author but that of your work?

Readers-What behaviors/tactics have you seen from Indie authors that you are absolutely appalled by? Please be honest.

Please keep this discussion respectful. If we aren't open to feedback, there's no room for growth. If you aren't open to growth, how can you become something bigger than you are now? Some comments may strike a nerve, but remember each person is entitled to their opinion. Of course I will delete any inappropriate comments, but please take the time to reflect on why a particular comment is striking nerves with you before you respond.

To start the discussion I’m going to share a trend I've noticed from several Indie authors, not just one! Please note the difference between stretching the truth and a lie, especially on things that are easy to check online.

Here is a randomly created very cheesy example of stretching the truth: 

"My book will change your life! I've got nothing but five star reviews, so I'm sure you'll love it too! (Insert link to where to buy said book)" 

Reality- you have 5 star reviews from readers, wonderful. If I'm an eighty year old  southern male, your book about a single woman's fast paced life in the big city isn't going to change my life. Your goal as an author was to sink a hook into those who it would appeal to, so not a big deal.

Here is a common lie: "My book is a top seller on (insert site that has its lists public)."

Reality-NO it's not. Why is this bad? Because I can see that list and so can every other potential reader out there. You are making yourself look like an idiot by insulting the intelligence of your audience. And why is that bad for you? If your own intelligence comes into question, then the products of your intelligence a.k.a. the integrity of your work, goes flying out the window right along with it. Yes some people may fall for it hook, line and sinker- but how often do you really expect it to work. Let those few be served up and let that sale pay for your dinner. But not me, any guess as to what I'm going to do immediately after I’ve popped right on over to the list you referenced to validate you in my mind as a liar? Yes-that’s right. I’m not gonna buy your book.

I may not directly call you out on it, but I do like to make these things known in a discreet manner. Why? Just in case you’ve somehow failed to miss something else that should be obvious-most people who spend money on books are very intelligent. They possess the ability to take words from a page and use their imagination to breathe life into them and create vivid played out scenes comparable to an HD screen. What a reader possesses is a gift that commands respect.


Please think of how you would react to a salesperson that disrespects you while visiting their store before you make such false claims that carry a backhand to their intelligence. Furthermore, please think everyone else’s reputation that you are dragging through the mud along with your own.

Sunday, July 10, 2011

Guest Blog: Emily McKeon's Thoughts on Revision

Hello everyone. I am thrilled to say that in just one month (and two days) of this site’s live existence we’ve had 485 visits! Thank you so much to the wonderful authors that have contacted me to be (or become) featured on this site and thank you equally as much to our visitors! I am pleased to have the honor to work on this site to showcase the dedication and strong spirit each Indie author is blessed with!

For today’s post, we’re going to have a guest post by Emily McKeon, one of my writer friends that I met via ABNA (gasp! I said that word!). Her dedication and perseverance to her craft in the face of criticism is magnificently exemplified in her contribution to our site. If you enjoy her post, feel free to visit Emily's site to enjoy more of her writing!

Thank you so much Emily for visiting us! And here's her contribution:

 Emily McKeon's Thoughts on Revision
“Bottom line: you've got talent, but this isn't ready yet. Spend some more time with it and my suggestions, and we'd be pleased to look at a resubmission.”  These are words I always thought I’d be ecstatic to hear.  It meant someone, besides my family and friends, saw something worthwhile in my writing.

 After countless rejections (Ok, they could be counted, but I’d prefer not to) including one on a requested full, here was my opportunity to edge my way into the publishing world.  The best part about this resubmission request was that it came straight from a publisher, not an agent.  So what did I do?

I’ll be honest; I cried.  After all the rejections that garnered little more than a sigh and a flurry of submissions to other agents, this opportunity caused tears.  I’m not really sure why, but I think it had to do with knowing I was so close and still not being able to reach the finish line.  The other rejections had been form, “Sorry, but this isn’t for us.”  This one gave me reasons.

I know I should have jumped right on those suggestions and started revising, but I didn’t.  Instead, they sat in my inbox for the weekend while I debated what I wanted to do.  Most of it was simple enough to change: eliminate ‘that’, ‘just’ and ‘I’ wherever it wasn’t necessary or the sentence could be restructured.  Others, like rewriting the entire opening, weren’t as easy.

Over that weekend, I mulled over how much I was willing to change my work to make it publishable.  My husband looked over the suggestions and managed to convince me they weren’t as bad as I thought they were.  With him pushing me along, and armed with the publisher’s critique, I set to work.

Doing the revisions, I realized there were a lot of things both the publisher and I had overlooked in previous read-throughs.  Things like my characters’ penchant for constantly opening and closing doors or smiling all the time.  Most of these were cut along with the ‘that’s, ‘just’s and ’I’s.

I went through and revised several times over the following weeks.  Each time, finding more of the things she had pointed out and corrected them.  Last Thursday, tired of looking at it and sure I would throw my computer out the window if I had to do another revision, I hit the send button.
Now, I’m sitting and waiting to hear back as to whether or not I’ve managed to revise it enough.  Keep your fingers crossed.  Meanwhile, now conscious of my most over used words and phrases, I’m off to edit my other MSS before they get sent off to Queryland and come back with the same comments.

Thursday, July 7, 2011

Author Interview: Jeff L. Dawson "Love's True Second Chance"

Today author Jeff Dawson is stopping by to share his novel “Love’s True Second Chance” with us.
From his novel’s Amazon.com description:
July 20th, 2009 7:00am I held her hand and kissed her face with the arrival of a sunny beautiful morning, hoping for a miracle. The shift change for nurses and doctors was in full swing. Staff checking in, charts being reviewed, doctors and nurses exchanging information; vital signs being verified. Debbie’s breathing is very labored as it had been for the last twenty four hours. I never knew if each breath would be her last. The cancer was running its course through her beautiful body at a terrible pace. An aide came in to change the sheets and clean her up. She asked if I would like her to wash Debbie's hair. I pondered the thought for a minute looking at the love of my live and replied in a hushed, choked tone, “She would like that. How long will it take you to change her bed and wash her hair?” She said about fifteen minutes. I stepped out of the room and called her friend Cathey to get an estimated time of arrival. She assured me she would be at the hospital within thirty minutes.

Debbie was in good hands with the aide. I decided to get a little air, purchase a coke and have a cigarette. I went to the store with one thought running through my mind, Is there anything else I can do for her? Had I done everything I could for the “love of my life”? Would God sit by her side and let her live out her life on earth or whisper in her ear, take her hand, and guide her to heaven? I had no control over what was happening to her.

Have you ever loved someone with all of your heart and soul? Have you lost a dear loved one to breast cancer? I have. I sought out my high school love for twenty-five years. We reunited in Jan of 2009 and were allowed to spend the most amazing seven months together.

Get a copy today to find out how deep one can truly love.
Rebecca: What was your inspiration for this particular book?
Jeff: Sharing a story about having a second chance at true love. I wasn't inspired to say, but more wanting to let others know that love is worth a second chance even if it might not have a happy ending.
Rebecca: A reader walks down the aisle of an imaginary book store and is about to pass up on reading the blurb on the book. What is the one thing that sets your book apart from the other hundreds of books on that aisle?
The broken heart on a bed of yellow roses. The cover will have the reader wondering why the heart is laying and surrounded by the roses. What caused the heart to be so thoroughly broken?
Rebecca: What efforts have you made to guarantee the quality of your book on the same level a reader might expect of a traditionally published book?
Jeff: I took the pains to have other readers review and read the manuscript. The provided insight I couldn't see. I had two editors work on the grammar and spelling issues that word didn't identify. I listened to all creative criticisms and made the appropriate changes.
Rebecca: You’re walking by a book club meeting that cannot agree on their next book. They decide to stop a random stranger (you) and ask for a book recommendation. Describe your book for us as if you are not the author.
Jeff: Hello ladies. How many here had a true love in high school or college that didn't end exactly as you planned? Have you ever wondered what would happen if given a second chance to correct the mistakes of the past? Would you give that person one more chance and how would you react when you find out your love has a potentially fatal disease? Would you take a second chance on love? Ladies, this book touches on all of those issues. The author pulls no punches. You will find yourself taking the author's side and then moving to her side when he shows how stupid males can be and then you will be pulling for both of them when she is re-diagnosed again. This is not a happily ever after book, but rather one that will have you thinking that love is worth a second chance even if the outcome is not the one we hope for.
Rebecca: Are there any hidden life lessons or underlying themes you hope the reader picks up while enjoying your work?
Jeff: Yes, Love is worth a second chance. Family can never be replaced and if that feeling becomes distant and somewhat forgotten, then we need to find it again.
Rebecca: Do you have a website/book trailer for your book?
Jeff: Yes. Facebook site http://www.facebook.com/pages/Loves-True-Second-Chance/201274679901838
Rebecca: I took a look at your site, and I couldn’t help notice that on the 20th of this month it will be two years since Debbie’s passing. In my own life, I try to remember the birthdays of those I’ve lost rather than the day their spirit moved on. Is there anything special traditions you have to honor Debbie on any day?
 Jeff: I try and make it to Tulsa to place a yellow rose on her final resting place and talk to her and let her know how much she taught me in our short seven months. She and her girls taught me how to be part of a family again and that we work to live and not vice-versa. If I don't make it to Tulsa I play the video her girls and I made then go and visit the cemetery in Seagoville, Tx. where she, Dad and Larry last talked to me (http://www.amazon.com/Everything-Happen-Cancer-Recovery-ebook/dp/B004EPYUSA/ref=sr_1_3?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1309798483&sr=1-3). Knowing I did everything I could for her was a wonderful feeling. Her words that day "You did everything you were supposed to do" eased all of the pain I was experiencing.
Rebecca: For any else out there who has recently or is facing the impending loss of someone they love, is there anything you would like to say to them?
Jeff:  It is worth it. I always wondered how I would have felt if I had heard of her passing without seeing again. I don't think I would have ever forgiven myself for the way I treated her in college (Chapter 4: Break-up). Yes, I wish she was still here but being able to help take care of she and her daughters for such a short time was well worth it. I also was allowed to spend the last seven months with my father's day (RIP 2005). I was allowed to also take care of him as the clock wound down. Like Debbie, I wouldn't trade those seven months for anything. Knowing we are where we need to be when it counts the most, is a true honor. We aren't saying goodbye to them as much as forging their memories and remembering all of the great times we spent together. Yes, the pain is unbearable when they pass, but knowing we were able to be with them can never be replaced.   
Rebecca: Who designed your cover art?
Jeff: I hired a woman to perform the graphics. I gave her all of the information and she did a very nice job. Debbie loved yellow roses. The heart? That would be mine.
Rebecca: What aspect of your book do you feel your cover art relates to?
Jeff: How my heart and soul reacted when the Dr. turned and said, "I'm very sorry. She's gone."
Rebecca: What is the one question no one has ever asked you during an interview that you would like to be asked? (This question may be borrowed in the future, so please keep that in mind before answering).
Jeff: Knowing and going through what you have in the last two years, would you do it again or would you take the safe route and be satisfied with seeing her one more time and saying goodbye without pursing a relationship?
Rebecca: In seeing your devotion to your love through your novel, I’d say that you’d go full speed ahead without any hesitations even with knowing the outcome. Living life without experiencing the type of love the two of you shared, one that transcends years passed by and meeting once more, would be a life without a very fulfilling and coveted privilege. When there are so many who will never experience love on such a magnificent scale, to bypass it because of the inevitable-one will have to exist after the other passes, even if under tragic circumstances, almost seems like taking it for granted.
Rebecca: What do you think Debbie would say about the novel?
Jeff: What would Debbie think? That is a tough one. She was very private person when we dated in high school and even more so in her later years. Her life hadn't turned out the way she had hoped when it came to personal relationships. I believe I was able to awaken the little girl who had forgotten how to have fun and enjoy the little things in life. Taking walks, holding hands, watching tv, washing dishes (chapter 12: Seven Months of Joy), or driving around town with her girls listening to the radio or a chosen CD; God I miss her. I think she would be very skeptical, but the book also helped her girls in the healing process. They were able to see just how much fun she was a teenager. The oldest Jessica made the comment one day, “We only knew her as Mom the Pharmacist. You showed us how much fun she really was as a teenager. We never knew." I believe she would be pleased with it since it helped her beloved girls.
Rebecca: Thank you for stopping by and sharing your novel with us Jeff!
Jeff: Becky, it was my pleasure and remember, Love is Worth a Second Chance.
You can purchase a copy of his novel by following this link Love's Second Chance on Amazon.com

Wednesday, June 29, 2011

Feature and a Giveaway!: Justice for Emily, Sandy Wolters


Today we have the pleasure of featuring the novel “Justice for Emily” by Sandy Wolters!
Sandy is hosting an ebook giveaway at http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/590847 through Friday July 1st. Hop on over and get a copy if you enjoy the excerpt below.
To get us started, Sandy has provided us a little insight into the excerpt:
“In this scene, Patrick has just met Rachael and they're having lunch.  He learns quickly that she has more than just the standard cop's intuition.”

He was trying to decide the best way to approach her about taking a sneak peek at what there was of Emily’s file when he noticed that she was looking at him but had a strange, far away look in her eyes. It was as if she were some place else. Her hands were clinched into fists and her breathing was erratic. Her eyes were glazed over and her mouth was slightly parted. She looked as though she were in some kind of trance.

Concerned, he reached out to touch her and got shocked. It was as if he had just touched a high voltage wire. What the hell was going on here?

All of the sudden she came around. She quickly looked behind their table to see how many people were there and then turned to look out the window at the front parking lot.

She said, "Call for backup. Call now. A lime green, old beat up car is going to pull up out front. The driver is going to stay in the car and the passenger is going to come in and rob the restaurant. Call for backup!"

He stared at her. "Are you feeling all right?"

"Dammit! There they are. Don’t worry I’ll take care of this. Don’t let the perp see you. He’ll run if he sees your uniform and I won’t be able to help him."

He looked out the window and sure enough, the car she described had just pulled up and the young, pimple-faced passenger was getting out with a small caliber gun in his hand.

Stunned, while he watched she pulled a Sig Sauer out of her boot, pushed the woman behind the cash register to the ground and waited for the gunman to come in.

As soon as he approached her, he held the gun up and yelled, "Give me all of your money or I’ll blow your fucking head off!"

She smiled raised her gun and said, "Throw your gun down, sweet pea, and you’ll live to see your mama for supper tonight. You’re under arrest."Startled, he threw his gun and made a noise any little girl would have been proud of while Patrick came up behind him and cuffed him.

He yelled, "It wasn’t loaded. I didn’t want to hurt anyone. I just needed the money."

Rachael looked at the perpetrator and said, "Does Kyle have any weapons in the vehicle with him?"

The shrieking boy looked at her and said, "How do you know my brother?"

In an agitated tone, she said, "Answer me. Are there any more weapons in the car?"

"No, he’s afraid. Please don’t hurt him. He’s my little brother."

Patrick looked at her and shouted, "What the hell is going on here?"

She said, "I’m going to get Kyle. Do you have more cuffs?"

"Bullshit. You are not going out there. You could be hurt. What the hell is going on here?"

"I’ll explain later, Patrick, but right now I have to get Kyle out of that car. You can’t go because you’re in uniform and he’ll run and possibly injure innocent people."

At that moment, she flung her Phoenix PD cap down on the counter and with her hands, hurriedly brushed back the most magnificent strawberry blond hair he had ever seen. How did this situation get so out of control so fast?

She started to leave, turned and said, "I’m going to get in the passenger side of the vehicle. When you see me throw the keys out the window, come and get him."

She put her gun in her pants at her back, walked out of the restaurant and straight for the open passenger door of the lime green car. She pulled the gun, got in beside Kyle, smiled and said, "This is a hold up. Give me your keys."

In a panic Kyle said, "No! No! No! You don’t understand. My brother is inside holding the restaurant up. We need the car to get away in. Please, if you take my car my brother is going to be really pissed."

She said seriously, "Wow, it really sucks to be robbed, doesn’t it?"

He looked at her with some hope and said, "Can I keep the car?"

She furrowed her brows as if in deep thought and said, "Okay. You can keep the car but you’re under arrest for participating in an armed robbery. Give me the keys."

A big thank you to Sandy for stopping by to visit us!
Visit Sandy’s website http://sandywolters.weebly.com/justice-for-emily-excerpt.html to sample the first two chapters!
Here’s an interview featuring Sandy on The Lit Chick Show. http://www.litchickshow.com/2011/06/paranormal-romance-on-lit-chick-show.html  Look for her special on July 20th!!

Monday, June 27, 2011

Author Interview, Jess Mountifield, With Proud Humility


Today we’re privileged to have a visit from Jess Mountifield!
Rebecca: Since your novel is a romance, what is your definition of love?
Jess: My definition of love is the choices we make when we decide to put someone else above ourselves. It's often more in the little things we do, like taking out the trash because we know our partners hate doing that themselves or sending that card to a friend we've not seen in ages to let them know we still think about them occasionally. But also it's in how well we stay patient with people around us, how much we are willing to try and teach them a better way when they mess up and how we ignore our feelings and do what's right.
Rebecca: What inspired you to pick the setting for the novel?
Jess: My setting was mostly chosen for me by the plot. I knew the book was going to be set on a ship a lot and would need a looser social structure than England allowed in the early 1800's. The Caribbean was still in turmoil from rebellions, wars and conquests over natives so a lot of the rigorous social etiquette was thrown out the window. My heroine would not have been able to do all the things she did had she grown up in England.
Rebecca: Is the story in any way a reflection of something that took place in yours or someone who is close to yours personal life?
Jess: Not really. I try to steer clear of my plots being too based on the people around me. Occasionally characters might have elements of the people around me but I try to keep my ideas as original as possible. With that being said I think we all draw on the things around us to some degree subconsciously.
Rebecca: I agree, yet at the same time there are instances where those in an author’s personal life might read too much of their selves into characters. Has that ever happened to you?
Jess: Not yet, but I imagine it will at some point. I think some people find it fairly natural to wish they were the hero or heroine in a novel so they project themselves onto what they are reading. The more characters and stories I write about the greater chance someone in my life will feel like it goes one step further and they might have inspired the character. I think I'd discourage that if I knew about it, however.
Rebecca: In your description we find the sentence "No price is too dear to Marie, who gambles everything on a marriage of convenience to a ship's captain she knows she can’t trust, but who may be one ally she needs." A lot can be implied from that sentence. We could either see the heroine fall in love with the man she used to get her goal accomplished, or perhaps see her fall in love with someone else and have to get away from the untrustworthy man to be with the other person. Are either of those correct?
Jess: Yes one of those is correct but to say which would spoil the plot a little. Needless to say the book does have a happy ending.
Rebecca: What is your feeling on the romance requirement of “happily ever after”? What if the heroine’s happily ever after is meant to come later in life with someone else and there are still strong romantic elements to the plot?
Jess: I have always felt that a book should try to end happily, if it can help it. Readers tend to read for escapism from their own lives and I have no desire to make them feel depressed when their own lives may be bad enough. I also feel that 'happily ever after' is often what we make it to be. I try where possible to show that in my books. Sometimes it's the commitment we have to making a relationship work. I think it ties in a little with my view of what love is. So to a degree I view it as a good ending for a book but my 'happy ever afters' aren't always likely to be conventional.
Rebecca: Who created your cover art?
Jess: The cover art was actually created for me by my own uncle-in-law with a little bit of prompting by me in terms of direction to go in. I've been somewhat blessed by the abilities in my husband's family. His uncle is an amazing web master and designer and his aunt also helped me with a lot of my historical research as well as editing as she used to be an editor for a magazine.
Rebecca: You’ve answered one of my “standard” questions within that answer. I usually ask the author what steps they’ve taken to ensure their work is on the same standard as writing coming from a traditional publishing house. You are very fortunate to have a former magazine editor in the family. How smooth was the feedback process considering a relative provided the feedback?
Jess: It actually went really well. I've never had too much trouble being told something needs changing in my work. I recognize Indie authors need to do everything they can to bring their work up to a similar standard to more traditionally published work. My Aunt-in-law was very good at presenting the changes needed in a non-threatening way as well.
Rebecca: How do you feel the cover art represents the heart of your novel?
Jess: I wanted it to convey that the book combines many different elements, from romance to action and adventure and of course plenty of swashbuckle so the still life kind of design was pretty much a must in my mind and hopefully it shows the combination of those elements, which I'd like to think I've combined well in the book itself.
Rebecca: What is one question that you've never been asked as an author or about your book that you would love to answer for us?
Jess: I've never been asked how my books villain knew about Marie's treasure in the first place. I have to admit I expected to be asked that one. The answer is definitely kept for the sequel though.
Rebecca: A teaser for the sequel! For those that become fans of this novel, when can we expect the sequel?
Jess: Not this year, unfortunately. I deliberately decided that I wouldn't write a sequel until I had a good idea for one, no matter how much fans asked for one. I have recently begun forming an idea but it's still just an idea and not one I'm going to have time to get written, edited and published before the end of the year. I'd be very disappointed with myself if I didn't have it out next year, however.
Rebecca: Thank you for stopping by Jess!
Jess: Thanks Rebecca.
Rebecca: You're very welcome!!
Jess’ novel “With Proud Humility”on Amazon.com by following this link:
You can visit Jess' site by following this link: www.jessmountifield.co.uk

Thursday, June 23, 2011

Author Interview, J.R. Tomlin, Freedom's Sword


Today we have an interview with J.R. Tomlin, author of the Scottish historic novel “Freedom’s Sword”.
Rebecca: What steps did you take to ensure that your book is on the same level as those readers can acquire through mainstream publishers?
J.R.: I worked with an experienced story editor who made some important suggestions. We did two story edits. I do think I initially made an error. The editor I worked with was not a copyeditor. On my next novel, I did a specific copyedit because these are different skills and areas of expertise. I am very happy with the story edit she did, but because of this some typos slipped through, not a great many but more than I was comfortable with. Several reviews mentioned typos. Because of that, someone did a copyedit for me, and what is now for sale is the re-edited version. And that, of course, is one of the advantages of being an independent writer. I do have the ability to change or correct something, even after publication.
Rebecca: Are there any underlying life lessons you hope that your readers will gather from reading your novel?
J.R.: Probably, although I think different readers might have different ones. The main character has to make decisions, difficult ones, about his loyalty to his family and to his country, and at times his love of his family and of his nation conflicted. These are somewhat different ones that we may have to make today, but many people are faced with sacrifice for something they're loyal to whether their nation or something else. At what point is the sacrifice too much? How do we balance those conflicting loyalties? I'm not sure I would have had the courage to make the decision that Andrew de Moray made. The novel doesn't necessarily give answers to those questions, except how he answered them and what those answers cost him.
Rebecca:  A few of your reviews praise you for your descriptions of Scotland and a reviewer even quotes your devotion to researching in preparation for the novel. Can you tell us more about your research process? How long did it take and what was the experience like for you as an author?
J.R.: You know, that's a difficult question to answer because I didn't go into researching it without a lot of knowledge, so my process involved reading over a life-time. I also studied medieval history at university. One of the most important sources on the Scottish side of the Scottish War of Independence is the epic poem The Brus by John Barbour which was written in about 1370. It happens my grandmother read me that poem when I was ten years old, so you see this is a story that is part of my background. But I didn't want my novel to be based only on legend, and I read most of the important works on that war. I wrote with a stack of references by my computer, especially Barron's work, The Scottish War of Independence, which is one of the few that deals extensively with Andrew de Moray who was until recently something of a forgotten hero.
Rebecca:  Did you use any movies or youtube clips for inspiration or to aid in the creation of the battle scenes?
J.R.: No. Medieval warfare and fighting techniques are misrepresented in almost all movies. I think movies is where people get the mistaken belief that most medieval battles didn't involve many people while in fact they often involved massive armies. It was, until CGI techniques at least, too expensive to have the numbers of people who actually took part in battles such as the Battle of Stirling Bridge.
Rebecca: When you add to that the fact that the Scots used a technique called the schiltron that was unusual even in the middle ages, movies are not at all helpful. What was helpful was working with medieval reinactors. Although they can't reproduce the huge battles, they do have the weapons medieval armies used, and I have practiced with every medieval weapon used in the novel. I was also able to observe some Scottish reinactors who formed a schiltron, which helped in describing it. A schiltron is a formation of pikes which can be either a square or circle to form a sort of hedgehog effect, by the way. It was a deadly formation against knights but had obvious weakness against archers. I also used some texts on warfare such as the classic, Art of War.
Rebecca: Your cover art is beautiful, it looks like a painting of a battle scene. Who created it?
J.R.: The original art is a 19th century etching which my cover designer, J. T. Lindroos, used to make the cover. I must admit, I fell in love with the cover. He also designed the cover for A Kingdom Cost, and I hope he can do the cover of the novel I'm working on now.
Rebecca: What is one question you've never been asked but would like to be asked as a writer or about your book?
J.R.: Do you feel that the fact that your novel is priced at 99 cents undervalues your work?
I worry about that. I have had readers tell me they assume 99 cent novels aren't any good.
I price Freedom's Sword at price because I don't think you can expect readers to pay the same for an unknown indie writer what they do for well-established historical writers such as Sharon Kay Penman, yet in reviews my work has been compared favorably to hers. I am willing to take that risk to gain readers who I believe will be willing to pay slightly more for my other novels. However, I also like the idea of novels being affordable. As a reader, I love the fact that I can afford many more novels now than I could before we authors could take our work directly to readers.
Rebecca: Thank you so much for stopping by!
J.R.: Thanks so much for the opportunity to answer your questions.

Book description from Amazon.com: James A. Anderson, author of Deadline, says: "...a stirring and highly readable novel..."

Before William Wallace... before Robert the Bruce... there was another Scottish hero...

In 1296, newly knighted by the King of the Scots, Andrew de Moray fights to defend his country against the forces of the ruthless invader, King Edward Longshanks of England. After a bloody defeat in battle, he is dragged in chains to an English dungeon.

Soon the young knight escapes. He returns to find Scotland under the heel of a conqueror and his betrothed sheltering in the hills of the Black Isle.

Seizing his own castle, he raises the banner of Scottish freedom. Now he must lead the north of Scotland to rebellion in hope of defeating the English army sent to crush them.
Freedom's Sword can be purchaesd at amazon.com by following the link below.  http://www.amazon.com/Freedoms-Sword-ebook/dp/B004RUZPPY

Tuesday, June 14, 2011

Book Review: Mystery at Ocean Drive by Janet Hurst-Nicholson

Our first review comes to us courtesy of Mis_T of  Bookaholics Book Club. She has reviewed the young adult novel "Mystery at Ocean Drive" by Janet Hurst-Nicholson.


Description "When 17 yr old Jason Hunter sets out to discover the identity of the mystery girl at Ocean Drive he and his friends find themselves caught up in a risky intrigue.

Jason is delivering newspapers on his motorbike when a Mercedes sweeps out of a driveway in front of him. He loses control of his scrambler and almost ends up under the car’s wheels. An attractive teenage girl leaps out to ask if he is hurt, but before Jason can reply the girl is bundled back into the Mercedes and driven off.

Jason’s instincts warn him that the girl is in trouble.

The following day he sees her in an upstairs window, but when he asks to speak to her he is told that there is no young girl living there. Why?

Jason is not about to give up and he enlists the help of his friends, Mark and David. Together they make a daring attempt to learn the girl’s identity, but just as it seems to be working, things go horribly wrong...
Has Jason’s intriguing mystery now put all three boys in danger?"



Mis_T's review: "This is a great mystery book for young boys! Although I'm a grown woman and I enjoyed it to lol. It's a short, fast paced book that will keep you guessing right the way through. the action starts up right away and doesn't give to the very end. The lead character is a great role model for young boys, he's clever and persistent and also has a pair of great friends willing to help him whenever he needs it.
I found it to be a thoroughly enjoyable, well written read. It has a very interesting story that I'll be saving for my son when he's older... and my daughters!"

She gave it 4 stars on her site. I asked her to also rate it using my scale for Indie Day in the Sun as well.


On a scale of 1-5 she rated the book as follows:
Originality of Concept 5
Quality of Writing 4
World Building 4
Character Development 4
Likely to recommend to another reader 5



22/25 not bad at all!


If this review has sparked your interest, feel free to visit the Amazon site for Mystery at Ocean Drive to download the sample or purchase the ebook!